Dr Moz I need some help

I have here an outline a a potentially really good poem. Its just needs a little  polish from an experienced poet like yourself. Please note oaks i am not asking for the input of anyone else!!
ODE TO GLEN JACKSON:There was a bent ref called Jackson,Who blew saffa sides to the maxim!His beady eye roamed far and wideTo find a penalty for his side.The offside law he couldn't abide,especially when it favoured his side.There was a  bent ref called Jackson,Who one day will get the maxim,Like Bryce Lawrence of yore Let' s get rid of this bore!!!!!

  change maximum for maxi m....poetic freedom?
Good effort Beenz!

 Thanks Draad good idea!

 Beeno, you do need a doctor but one with a degree in psychiatry. I recommend a straight-jacket combined with electric shock treatment & endless viewing of the rules of rugby. Patience is called for so this treatment could take a life time. We are prepare d to wait for results.

 Draad given your poetic sensibilities i would consider adding a verse from you if you can maintain the high stan dard already set?

 JW I thought you were firmly strapped in for the night. not reading quality poetry!

 Where is the good Dr Moz when you need him!

 Jantjies should have kicked,but he passed!Oh what'n ass!Mapoe tried to repair, but Jane caught his kick with flair....and the Canes were 10 ahead in their lair.

  I recommend ECT Beeno?

 While we are at it Moz we need some integration of this verse with the above:
There was a dainty flyhalf called Beau, Who once slotted two goals in a row!He never got hit as he off loaded to others That took his big hits as though they were brothers!Beau skipped and he danced with never a care,His smile broad and wide with never a scare.Until one day he met a young KrielAnd learned it was hard om rugby te speel!

.... and scored the winning try

 Draad you poem is far too dark and off track. It lacks poetic flair and there is poor rhythm as Dr Moz I am confident will confirm. 

 And why oh why oh whymust there always in the ointment, be a Kiwi fly!

 Draad much better you are getting there!!This becoming poets corners! 

 A nyhow time for yours truly to relax as its been a trying time refuting all the kbbs errors!

 Beenz, I'm no poet, I was hoping you lot can structure my poor attempts. Well educated folks like you and Moz should be able to pollish my tomfoolery. 

 There was a wee chap called Jantjieswho was said to crap his pantiesIn spite of skills his temperament kills& the wee Lions were sent packing
But seriously, the Lions played very well and it was a pretty even game. The ref was fine IMO. Jant jies was under pressure all night from the defensive line. On his kicks at goal, he should have punched them low & hard.
Congrats to the Canes, their defense did not allow a try in the playoffs. There was no need for them to try the 50/50 passes they played within themselves. 

 A pride of lions went down-underby a hurricane ,rent asunder ,a lion-skin  rug the floor it drapes,upon which Barrett now  fornicates....Fixed it beandik.

Beeno celebrates another loss with prose & lyrics
Has anyone told him he's not plugged in (pun intended)

 Bwahahahahah ou JW in full denial. Go and read what Plum and I wrote under Moz's thread about the data point re J antjes. Read an learn JW its time we saw some progress!